Polish Me Home
via the daily post
Slam your fingers through the mud
grasp my sides and lift me up;
Cradle my complex body betwixt your fingers
as you gently rub
Strip me bare. Your words cut these walls and grind my corners
I’m lost to the senses within this mess
Each day
more is lost
Each day I’m falling fast
my sense of self
is brushed to dust
you’ve polished
my soul
now bring me home
2017
Love this piece! It’s wonderful! Love the way this piece made me feel. It’s great, good job! I love how you phrased everything so perfectly. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on!
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Thank you so much! I’m just coming back from a much needed writers break & the responses have been so uplifting… I’m glad to have made a positive impact & thank you for encouraging words 🙂
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That’s great! Would really love to see more from you 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 hopefully I don’t disappoint lol
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You’re welcome and don’t worry 🙂 Just do your best.
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Quite abstract
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As is most of my writing, but I enjoy looking at different angles. Glad you liked it!
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Very complex imagery – explained so beautifully
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Thank you:)
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the last few lines were insane, amazing stuff!
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Thank you!
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